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Parallel Construction

Editors look for parallel construction while editing your work.

Below are some examples:

Gerund and Noun

Incorrect:
Complete the report by writing a summary or by submission of an abstract.

Correct:
Complete the report by writing a summary or by submitting an abstract.

Gerund and Infinitive

Incorrect:
Her duties are tracking messages and to phone customers.

Correct:
Her duties are tracking messages and phoning customers.
Her duties are to track messages and to phone customers.

Lists

Incorrect:
Our company provides excellent service including the following:

    1. Preparing your artwork with attention to detail
    2. We manufacture to your specification
    3. Timely delivery

Correct:
Our company provides excellent service including the following:

    1. Preparing artwork with attention to detail
    2. Manufacturing product to your specification
    3. Delivering goods in a timely manner

According to the Chicago Manual of Style, capitalize the first word of each item in a list, and do not place a period at the end unless the item is a complete sentence.



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